Comments & Reviews

Client Comments

Bruce is an amazing resource for editing services. He has a well-honed editing process. He takes an interest in your work and adds value to your writing content as well as delivers a meticulously edited written document. I give him my highest recommendation.

—Maureen Craig, MSN, RN Clinical Nurse Specialist–Nephrology

Words do not express my sincere gratitude. Graduation would have not been possible without your support.

—Karen Hill, PhD, ANP-C, MSN, RN

Thanks again!!!!  You are such a great resource!! I will definitely keep you in mind when I start writing again!! I actually learned to enjoy it!

—Maritza Lopez, MSN, RN

I just found out that I passed my comp! Thank you so much for all of your guidance and support!!

—Nirali Thakker, RN, MSN


I just picked up my comp exam paper—I passed.  Thank you so much for all your help. I wouldn’t have passed without your help.

—Roland Zepf, PhD, MSN, RN, ACRN


Passed! With RAVE reviews! Bruce, thank you so much for your timeline and for helping me thru this process. I really don’t know what I would have done without your help.

—Joannie Ericson, RN, MSN


You are a such great editor! I want to thank you for everything—for your help with my paper and for your support.

—Ghada Abulnaja, MSN, RN


Thank you so much for your immense contribution to the success of my comp!  I passed!  [My reader said:] “This is one of the best comps I have ever read!  I encourage you and your team to consider developing a manuscript or brief article to a journal on hospital administration/ethics . . . . You are a good writer!”

—Stacy James-Ryan, MSN, RN


I passed!!!  Thank you so much for all your help. I am really happy with the final product. I could not have done it without you!! Thank you for caring about us so much and sacrificing your precious time (and sleep). You are amazing . . .

— Naomi Kawabata, MSN, RN

The paper looks great! The feedback and guidance you provide in your editing are exceptional. I truly appreciate the guidance as this helps me in future papers. My professors were pleased with the paper and I received an A in the course. Thank you again for your feedback and suggestions.

—Ilufredo (Fred) Tantoy, PhD, MSN, RN

Thank you so much for your help throughout the comp process. It was a pleasure working with you. I definitely learned a lot. You are a great teacher. All nursing professionals could benefit from your expertise.

Kim Ureta, MSN, RN


The presentation went very well—actually fantastic!! My chair noted that my writing has “improved”—or should I say she commented that my editor had a lot of work to do and it showed. They are very pleased with the end product.  Have to say Bruce you rock!!!

—Rita Herm-Barabasz, DNS, RN, ACNP


Here is a copy of my published article! I want to acknowledge that you went beyond the call of duty in editing my manuscript! I especially appreciated your emotional support during the stressful process of getting my paper publication ready.

—Lila Louie, MS, RN, PMHNP-BC, LCSW 


I passed with flying colors! Thanks again for all of your patience and great editing expertise! Reader 1: “Paper is well written . . . . Great job!!” Reader 2: “This, overall, is an outstanding paper. I enjoyed and learned from reading it.” Thanks again Bruce. I couldn’t have done it without your help!

— Jolene Scarella, MSN, RN 


Professional Endorsements

“I always felt that your passion and your work were very special indeed, and no doubt have enlightened, inspired and brought a spirit of excellence to the many students and the many lives that your work has touched.”  

Elizabeth Nieginski, Publisher, Springer Publishing Nursing Division

Excerpts from reference letter: “Bruce has taught our Writing for Academic Success, Foundations of Academic Writing, and Academic Oral Skills courses. . . . [He] has been a tremendous educator and an asset to our school and our students. . . . [H]is commitment to education is exemplary. . . . [We] have received overwhelmingly positive feedback about Bruce and his dedication to our students.

—Shirley Evers-Manly, PhD, RN, FAAN, former Assistant Dean, Academic Excellence and Diversity Enhancement, University of California San Francisco School of Nursing

The students thank you for all the help you gave them, especially the individual attention you paid to each and every one of them. One of the biggest gifts you gave many of them was confidence in their writing skills and a sense of direction.

—Catherine Bain, (ret.), MScN, RN, Director, International Academic Services, assistant clinical professor, University of California, San Francisco

Many of my students, especially in the PhD program, have truly benefited from your teaching and mentoring. It has been life changing for those who come into graduate school from an unlevel educational playing field. Bruce, you have been such an asset to our school.

—Susan Kools, PhD, RN, FAAN, Professor

Immense appreciation and thank you for your expertise, dedication, and commitment to our student’s writing, learning, and critical thinking.

Catherine Waters, PhD, RN, FAAN, professor, UCSF School of Nursing

Professors’ Comments on Students’ Papers

This is one of the best comps I have ever read!  I encourage you and your team to consider developing a manuscript or brief article to a journal on hospital administration/ethics . . . . You are a good writer!  —Reviewer

This is a very well-written critical review of the literature on the impact of RRS on inpatient mortality rates. Overall, the writer of this paper demonstrated excellent scientific writing skill and proficient knowledge of literature review.  —Reviewer

Great job on a very important topic, beautifully written!  —Reviewer

This, overall, is an outstanding paper. I enjoyed and learned from reading it.  —Reviewer

First, I really enjoyed reading this comp. . . . Overall, your writing is also excellent. . . . Congratulations on writing an EXCELLENT comp….and please publish this when you are done!  —Reviewer

Paper is well written with clear identification of the problem and its relevance to practice. Research is critically reviewed and discussed very thoroughly in a very readable way. Great job!!  —Reviewer